混乱の子, Дзенствующий оборотень
Многострадальный "Prince Charming", чтобы не ломать традицию G/General, для окончательного поста был отцензурен.
Будь я проклята, если из-за пары слов задвину его в PG.

Was it the fine weather, or lack of obstacles in a past couple of weeks, or an auspicious moon phase, but Sanzo smiled before going upstairs to occupy his room. Moreover, he smiled at his companions.
Hakkai felt his body temperature going up several degrees.
He was still in a pleasant aftershock, eyes on the retreating figure, when he heard Gojyo speaking in a flat voice.
"Thank gods he doesn't do that all the time. Or I would be dead already."
It took Hakkai two seconds of silence to gather his thoughts, and then realisation dawned.
"Oh, I see..." he managed meekly, turning nice shade of pink as his brain supplied him with the proper imagery. He carefully tugged on the collar of his shirt in order to get some ventilation.
Some more silence followed, while the part of brain controlling emotions was busy denying requests on calculation of his own chances of getting a bit closer to Sanzo and living to enjoy it.
"Hey, guys, what's up with you?"
Hakkai shifted his gaze and studied Goku for a few moments.
"Sweet innocence," he sighed.
"Nah, lack of brains," stated Gojyo.
Кстати о переводах: мне тут всё упорно вспоминается, как Вашу Prince Charming превратила в "принца-очаровашку"...
Bessyana, а вот всяким мазоку без стыда и с отключаемой совестью просьба не влиять меня негативно.
Как определить... Ну... опытным путем, например...
А Ваша аська по прежнему в гробу?
DoC
а первый вариант был лучше)